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Leads for a Most
Embarrassing
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exploring leads in your writers notebook
before writing a draft

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Student Samples: Elementary

The Seed That Stuck
by Calvin, fourth grade writer

It was a warm sunny day at the Little League Field. We had two outs, and I was on deck. I was very nervous, so to calm down my nerves, I stuck my hand in a sunflower seed bag and took one out. Right there and then on that field began my downfall.

Ben ran to first, and then second. He almost made it to third but was tagged out by Fred. I stepped up to home plate, and I swallowed the seed. It was going down my throat, but then it got stuck and didn’t come out. Clamping my hands on my neck, I choked like Darth Vader. I dropped my bat, and I had to sit out for the rest of the game.

I heard giggling everywhere, even from my best friend. My dad asked me if I wanted to play when it hurt less. “No way!” I announced. “Not a chance. I’m so sorry, Dad. ”

I sat at my house for a very long time before my mom called a doctor’s office. I went, and they put a long, painful-looking stick down my throat. They made me open my mouth up while squeezing my eyes shut. Then the stick touched the seed, and it slid right down my throat.

My mom and dad do not let me eat sunflower seeds anymore. I wish I could at least have the ones without shells, but for some reason they do not even let me have those.


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