Student Samples: Upper Elementary
 A Doughnut Machine:
The Revolutionary Doughnut
by Nicole, fourth grade writer
I will tell you how I make a revolutionary doughnut. First, a robotic arm drops the gooey dough into the molds. Then a conveyor belt brings the dough to a burning-red hot oven. A little robotic arm takes the doughnuts off the conveyor belt and fries them in oily grease. After that, a worker dabs each doughnut with sugar. Now the robots drop blueberries on one side and raspberries on the other. Finally another worker sprinkles star sprinkles on the doughnut. The conveyer belt then takes them over and a little machine glazes them with hot melted frosting. Last but not least, the doughnuts cool for at least a half an hour and then you have a revolutionary doughnut.
 A Rube Goldberg-inspired Doughnut Machine:
Doughnut Machine
by Austin, fourth grade writer
Welcome, this is a tour of a brand new donut-making machine that is desinged by my donut-making company. I’m going to be your host. Maybe you’ve heard of me. My name is Austin. First off, I throw this piece of wet dough on this handy-dandy conveyer belt. Second, the machine punches a hole into the now dry dough. After that, the donut is filled with jelly, tasty jelly. Now come through the door. You ask "Why?" Well, the machine is so big it takes up three rooms.
This handy contraption fills the doughnut with air so it’s nice and puffy. Following that, the conveyer belt drops the donut into a hot fryer. Up above the fryer is this bowling ball wall that keeps people from getting hurt. BEEP! Oh, this is great. You get to see this in action. Watch the wall. It will open up. After that, the donut will fall on this hot fryer. Soon the donuts will shoot through this glaze hoop. At the same time, the bowling ball may go into the gutter. If it hits one pin, it will be a strike and the machine will work twice as fast. BEEP! Ahh, a gutter ball.
Oh, this machine will only make 1000 donuts every 24 hours when set at maximum speed. Here, this next step is the last. Now step through this door, and you will see the donuts land in this box. It’s shipped to donut shops. Oh no! BUMP! The bowling balls are breaking the wall. We’ll need to make sure no one is hurt. Bye!
 An Original Machine:
The Cookie Machine
by Bridget, fourth grade writer
Do you like cookies? Well, here is a great machine that makes them. In the beginning, the wet, greasy dough is plopped on a clean and green conveyor belt. Afterwards, the moist bittersweet chocolate chips are mixed in. At the same time, the cookies are molded into fun shapes, such as stars and hearts. Soon the cookies are cooked in a fiery hot giant oven. After that, the cookies are packaged and wrapped. Last but not least, they are shipped to large grocery stores, so you can enjoy these delicious cookies.
 An Original Machine:
Dog Washer 3000
by Brooklyn, 4th grade writer
Washing dogs is dreadful, but now you don’t have to with the Dog Washer 3000. To begin with, a robotic arm grabs a dog that needs to be cleaned. After that, the dog is locked into a harness so that the dog won’t run away. Soon, two robotic claws mix soap and water that is poured onto the dog. Next some wipers wipe off all the mud or other things off the dog. Then some water is poured onto the clean dog. Lastly another robotic claw grabs the dog and a different claw grabs a hair drier and the dog is dried. Results: The cleanest dog in the universe!
 A Doughnut Machine:
The Donut O’ Pounder
by Sydney, fifth grade writer
In the beginning, some moist sticky dough gets tossed into a giant white machine, also known as the “Donut O’ Pounder." When the dough enters the machine, monstrous knuckles come down from the top of the machine and start pounding the dough at a fast pace. Afterwards, tiny, tiny blue jelly people arrive in their jelly mobiles and squirt yummy grape jelly into the fluffy circles of dough. Eventually, they wiggle into a dark chamber and white flakes of sugar fall from above and place a thin white layer of sugar on top of the dough. Finally, the moist, sticky dough is now cooked and soon takes a quick trip to "Stomach Road."
 An Original Machine:
Pizza Machine
by Noah, fifth grade writer
Everybody thinks that pizza is awesome, right? Well, I’ve created the Pizza Baking Machine 500. This is how it works. The first step in my machine’s directions is to choose your crust thickness, the cheese choice and the toppings. Second, once you put the money in the slot, some dough squirts onto a conveyor belt and it gets squashed by a plate. The dough, then, is carried onto the thrower, which tosses the dough. Afterwards, the dough is put on an elevator and goes on a conveyor belt. Then it falls down a shaft to air the dough out. Finally, the dough slides on a conveyor belt to get “topped” with sauce, cheese and toppings. Meanwhile, another pizza is getting cooked on an auto elevator oven where it is raised on a belt. Last but not least, the pizza is put on a plate and lowered on a table. It is ready to eat!
 A Doughnut Machine:
Moving Through the Machine
by Orlando, sixth grade writer
First, the machine flips on and starts to grow hotter and hotter, getting ready to cook the doughnut. Next, a metal arm comes shooting in with a measuring cup at the end, and it scoops the dough into a round mold. It seems to stay in the machine for an eternity. Eventually, a little white needle impales the doughnut and fills it with cream. In the meantime, the machine smothers the doughnut with chocolate. To finish, you put it on a cooling rack to cool off and then eat it.
 An Original Machine:
Robo-Breakfast-Maker
by Dylan, sixth grade writer
This is how the Robo-Breakfast-Maker makes breakfast. Initially, the pancake mix is poured into a bowl where it is mixed with water. Secondly, the mixture is poured into a pancake mold, where it cooks. Next the pancake falls onto a conveyor belt and onto the plate below. Meanwhile, the thawed bacon falls into a pan where it is cooked by robots. Eventually the bacon falls onto a conveyor belt and onto the plate below. While that is being cooked, an egg falls into a tube, is injected with a needle, and the yolk and whites are sucked out. They are cooked and fall to a conveyor belt and onto the plate. Finally, you grab the plate. Breakfast is ready to eat!
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A Doughnut Machine:
An Original Machine: