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This Lesson's Title:

Color my World Grey and Blue

exploring color and its effect on mood and setting

This lesson was created by NNWP Teacher Consultant Dena Harrison. Click here to access all of Dena's on-line lessons.

This writing prompt inspired by

the song "Grey Street" by the Dave Matthews Band.

Click here to do a Google search for the lyrics.


Teacher Instructions & Lesson Resources :

Pre-step…before sharing the published model:   Before sharing the songs “Grey Street” by the Dave Matthews Band and “Blu is a Mood” by Blu Cantrell, begin the discussion of colors by asking students what their favorite colors are and why. Do these colors make them feel a certain way when they wear or see them? Jot some of their ideas down on the board or overhead. Next, share some of the incredibly interesting information on color from one of these websites with your students:

Both websites have interesting facts on different aspects of color and how they can affect moods.

Another great way to begin (or continue!) the discussion about color, is to share the book My Many Colored Days, by Dr. Seuss. This is an adorable book that shows how different colors affect the many moods of a gingerbread shaped character. ("On Purple Days/ I'm sad./ I groan./ I drag my tail./ I walk alone”)

Students of all ages will be able to relate to this book and the way the colors and moods are described by Seuss. Click here to see WritingFix's poetry assignment that uses this book.


Step one…sharing the published model:    Put The Dave Matthew’s Band’s song lyrics on the overhead; use the Google link above (just below the picture of the album cover) to find a set to print on a transparency. 

Read through the song with your students as you listen to it on your classroom I-Pod.  You may also want to point out the fact that this is a free verse poem/song and the words do not rhyme.  Explain to students that free verse poetry is a fun form of poetry because it is mostly patterned after speech and images.  Another great thing about free verse poetry is that you have the freedom to use sound effects and shortened lines whenever you feel, without worrying about getting your words to rhyme! You will also need to point out that the song’s lyrics match up a place with a color that reflects the moods and feelings associated with that place.

Comparison/Contrast Idea: You also may wish to compare the lyrics of “Grey Street” with the lyrics of “Blu is a Mood” by Blu Cantrell. Blu Cantrell’s song does not relate color to a setting, but rather describes all that the color blue can be in a very poetic way. Click here to visit WritingFix's collection of Comparison & Contrast Resources.


Step two…introducing student models of writing:  To give them an idea of the writing assignment at hand, in small groups, have your students read and respond to any or all of the student models that come with this lesson.  The groups should certainly talk about the idea development and word choice, since these are the focus of the lesson.


Step three…thinking and pre-writing:  Now it is time to pass out the graphic organizer for this assignment.   Have the students brainstorm two or three of their favorite ideas for each section of the graphic organizer (Colors, Moods and Places) to get warmed up for their own writing.

Next, they will pick their favorite one from each column to write about. (They may also need access to a thesaurus to help them come up with different shades of the color they choose.)

Once the class has their graphic organizers completed, take a few minutes to have the students share their ideas with one another before beginning their free-verse poem.


Step four (revising with specific trait language):   To promote response and revision to students' first drafts, attach WritingFix's Revision and Response Post-Its to your students' drafts.  Make sure the students rank their use of the trait-specific skills on the Post-Its, which means they'll only have one "1" and one "5."   Have them commit to ideas for revision based on their Post-It rankings.  For more ideas on WritingFix's Revision & Response Post-Its, click here.


Step five (editing for conventions):  After students apply their revision ideas to their drafts and re-write neatly, require them to find an editor.   If you've established a "Community of Editors" among your students, have each student exchange his/her paper with multiple peers.  With yellow high-lighters in hand, each peer reads for and highlights suspected errors for just one item from the Editing Post-it.  The "Community of Editors" idea is just one of dozens and dozens of inspiring ideas that is talked about in detail in the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Going Deep with 6 Trait Language Workbook for Teachers.


 

Step six (publishing out loud and on-line):   If your students had fun doing this writing, they might enjoy sharing their original poems whole-class or in small groups.

Interested in publishing student work on-line?  We invite student writers to post final drafts of their original at WritingFix's Community of Student Writers.  This is a safe-to-use blog for students and teachers. No writing is posted until it is approved by the moderator. Contact us at publish@writingfix.com if you have questions about getting your students published.

 

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