An I-Pod Inspired Writing Lesson from WritingFix
Focus Trait: VOICE Support Trait: IDEA DEVELOPMENT

Navigating WritingFix:

Return to the WritingFix Homepage

Return to the I-Pod Lesson Collection

________________

Navigating this lesson:

Lesson & 6-Trait Overview

Teacher Instructions & Lesson Resources

Student Writing Samples from this Lesson

_________________

On-line Publishing:

Publish your students at our Ning!
(You must be a member of our "Writing Lesson of the Month" ning to post.)

Student Samples Page:
If Today is Your
Last Day

writing a letter about a loved one's importance to you

A song by Nickelback is inspiring student writers to try new techniques with the traits of voice and idea development. Join us in teaching (and adapting) this on-line lesson and sharing your students' work.

You can publish up to three of your students' edited and finished stories at this page.

Use these samples to inspire your student writers! Discussing the strengths of published student samples before, while, and after using this on-line assignment is important. If your students are engaged in trait- or skill-inspired discussions about any of the samples we've posted here, they will produce better writing, especially if you help them take their writing all the way through the writing process.

Thank you, those who share their students' writing with us.


Additional Student Samples Being Sought:
Grades 6, 9, 10, 11, 12

Learn more about WritingFix's policies for publishing student work by visiting our Publishing Student Writers Information Page.

WritingFix is currently seeking additional student samples from this writing assignment that can be featured in this space. Submitted student work must show evidence of revision, editing, and the final draft must be typed and sent through e-mail. Teachers: if you can help us obtain up to three student samples, along with a digital photo of the student(s) and a signed permission slips, we will send you either a complimentary copy of one of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's print publications.

To have us consider your students' writing for inclusion on this page, you must post the writing to our Ning page dedicated to this lesson. Click here to access that page. You must first be a member of the Writing Lesson of the Month Network in order to post.


Student Samples: Middle School

Dear Sopie,

Let me first tell you who I am. My name is Marissa, and I am your older sister. Unless you have the best memory of human kind, you will not remember me, and that hurts me more than anything else.

I wish I could be there for your first birthday, your wedding, and when you become a mother, but these horrible turn of events have stolen that from me. The only thing that brings even slight joy to me is knowing what a beautiful young woman Mom and Dave have made of you. How I wish I could see you become that woman.

There are so many things I want to tell you in so little time. First, keep "the beast" in line for me; our brother can be such a pain. Second, tell our parents how much you love them every day, for I regret not doing this myself. Don’t ever be afraid to try the things you love, and have fun. You have a wonderful life ahead of you so you have to live it well. Goodbye Sopie, I love you so much. Never forget that.

With Love,

Your Sister,
Marissa (7th grade writer)


Dear Alisunn,

There is a wonderful world full of words that could describe our friendship, but only one more day for us to share it.

There’s only one person in this world who knows my every secret, and about the best and the worst days of my life. Every tear that has ever fallen, you’re always there to catch it when I’m down. You are one of many people who can make me laugh, almost to where we are lying on the floor, breathless, usually over the silliest mistakes that always bring us closer.

Hours of glossing our lips, taking silly pics, and eating fatty foods, the best days I’ll never forget. We’ve grown so close, and you are the most precious person in my life. You are so important to me and my family, you have us and always will, and we love you.

Never, not ever, will I regret the day we met. Thank you for always being there, being the one I can go to for anything. Crying over stupid boys, or other bad situations, thick and thin, you have changed my life so much in the best ways possible. I’m sorry to be saying good bye to our past. Please look forward to the future. You’re growing up, life goes on, and I’ll someday be long gone. I will miss you, and I have faith in you to make good decisions. I wish the best for your future and I’m sorry I can’t be there to make more special memories, then look back at them with you. I hope you never forget the strength you’ve given me or the amazing friendship we shared. I love you, sis…

Forever,

Kayla (8th grade writer)

 

WritingFix Homepage Lesson & 6-Trait Overview   
Teacher Instructions & Lesson Resources  Student Writing Samples

© WritingFix. All rights reserved.