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Using 90th Street's Advice

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The writing of author Roni Schotter is inspiring student writers to try new techniques with the traits of idea development and word choice.

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Student Sample Being Sought: Early Elementary

WritingFix is currently seeking a K-3rd grade student's sample for this writing assignment. Teachers: if you can help us obtain up to three student samples, along with a digital photo of the students and a signed permission slips, we will send you either a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Elementary Writing Guide, or you may choose from any of our NNWP publications. Writing written as a class or in student groups is always acceptable.

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Student Sample: Upper Elementary

A Visit to the Museum
by Alfredo, fifth grade writer

Person/Character: a hunter
Place/Setting: a museum (at night)
Thing: a net

Joe entered the museum of Ancient History, looking for an unusual adventure, a terrifying adventure because he was a brave hunter with his net. All of a sudden, Joe heard steady footsteps behind him. He twisted his body around to see what had happened, but nothing was there except for the American Indian exhibit. He was frightened; he also felt someone watching him. The cold, dark museum was silent except for the wind coming from an opened window, but then he heard the sound of moving keys. A little bit of moonlight shone on Joe’s silver net launcher and made him fall down. When he looked up, the dinosaur’s skeleton in the dark made him tremble. Joe heard someone whistling, so he turned around, accidentally pressing the button to launch the net. What if Joe’s net was launched to a police officer that worked at night?

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Student Sample Being Sought: Middle School

WritingFix is currently seeking a 7th or 8th grade student's sample for this writing assignment. Teachers: if you can help us obtain up to three student samples, along with a digital photo of the students and a signed permission slips, we will send you either a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Secondary Writing Guide, or you may choose from any of our NNWP publications.

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