A Picture Book Writing Lesson from WritingFix
Focus Trait: SENTENCE FLUENCY Support Trait: WORD CHOICE

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Animals Not to [Verb] with...

writing four four-line animal poems to make your reader giggle

The writing of author Karin Ireland is inspiring student writers to try new techniques with the traits of sentence fluency and word choice.

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Student Sample: Early Elementary

Do not take your snail to school.
He'll be too slow in the hall.
By the time he gets to his desk to do his work,
The teacher says, "Time to go home, one and all!"

by Jared, 3rd grade writer

 

(Click here to print Jared and three of his classmate's poems)

 


Student Sample: Upper Elementary

Don’t take a panda to play X-Box
Because he always cheats, you see.
As soon as I start to win,
He bites me on the knee!

by Mackenzie, 4th grade writer

(Click here to print Mackenzie and three of her classmate's poems)


Student Sample Being Sought: Middle School

WritingFix is currently seeking a 7th or 8th grade student's sample for this writing assignment. Teachers: if you can help us get a student sample, along with a digital photo of the student and a signed permission slip, we will send you a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Secondary Writing Guide.

Write to us at publish@writingfix.com and write 'Don't Take Your Snake for a Stroll' in your e-mail's subject line, if you have a student sample to share with us.


Student Sample Being Sought: High School

WritingFix is currently seeking a 9th-12th grade student's sample for this writing assignment. Teachers: if you can help us get a student sample, along with a digital photo of the student and a signed permission slip, we will send you a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Secondary Writing Guide.

Write to us at publish@writingfix.com and write 'Don't Take Your Snake for a Stroll' in your e-mail's subject line, if you have a student sample to share with us.

 


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