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 Between Repeated Lines
using repetitive lines to organize poems
about family members
The writing of author Mary Ann Hoberman is currently inspiring student writers to try new techniques with the traits of sentence fluency and word choice.
Your students can self-publish their writing done to this lesson by clicking here.
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Student Sample: Early Elementary
 My Father
by
Muhammad, second grader
My father has a smile,
His teeth shine,
His teeth shine.
He’s excited when he sees me,
He is kind,
He is kind.
His cheeks go up when he comes home,
He seems fine,
He seems fine.
I am happy when he smiles,
He is mine,
He is mine.
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Student Sample Being Sought: Upper Elementary
WritingFix is currently seeking a 4th-6th grade student's sample from this writing assignment that can be featured in this space. Submitted student work must show evidence of revision, editing, and the final draft must be typed and sent through e-mail. Teachers: if you can help us obtain up to three student samples, along with a digital photo of the students and a signed permission slips, we will send you either a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Elementary Writing Guide, or you may choose from any of our NNWP publications.
Write to us at publish@writingfix.com and use 'Family Reunion' in your e-mail's subject line, if you have a student sample to share with us.
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Student Sample Being Sought: Middle School
WritingFix is currently seeking a 7th or 8th grade student's sample from this writing assignment that can be featured in this space. Submitted student work must show evidence of revision, editing, and the final draft must be typed and sent through e-mail. Teachers: if you can help us obtain up to three student samples, along with a digital photo of the students and a signed permission slips, we will send you either a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Secondary Writing Guide, or you may choose from any of our NNWP publications.
Write to us at publish@writingfix.com and use 'Family Reunion' in your e-mail's subject line, if you have a student sample to share with us.
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Student Sample Being Sought: High School
WritingFix is currently seeking a 9th-12th grade student's sample from this writing assignment that can be featured in this space. Submitted student work must show evidence of revision, editing, and the final draft must be typed and sent through e-mail. Teachers: if you can help us obtain up to three student samples, along with a digital photo of the students and a signed permission slips, we will send you either a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Secondary Writing Guide, or you may choose from any of our NNWP publications.
Write to us at publish@writingfix.com and use 'Family Reunion' in your e-mail's subject line, if you have a student sample to share with us.
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