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 I Wanna [Something]...
writing a persuasive letter that will be responded to by a classmate
The writing of author Karen Kaufman Orloff is inspiring student writers to try new techniques with the traits of voice and word choice.
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Student Sample: Early Elementary
(Samples posted at WritingFix underwent all steps of the writing process.)
 A Persuasive Letter Exchange
by Imanne, second grade writer
Dear Mom,
Can I please get the adorable puppy Samantha is selling at her garage sale? I’ll take care of it and I’ll bathe it and groom it. In fact, I’ll even make sure he doesn’t get dirty. Even if he does, I’ll clean him straight away. You don’t have to worry about him making a mess. I’ll litter train him and make sure he doesn’t get your clean floors muddy.
Your pleading, careful, knowing youth,
Charlotte
Dear Charlotte,
I understand that you are trying to be so convincing but not so fast. First of all, how do I know you are going to remember to clean him every time he gets dirty? Second, how do I know you are going to have time with all your homework and housework? You’re a busy girl and I’m not sure you are even ready for a pet of your own. You only turned eight last week!
Your wondering, concerned parent,
Mom
Dear Mom,
Eight is a big number. It’ll be like an extra birthday present. Plus, I assure you, I do have time. It’s the end of the year so I don’t have a lot of homework. And I’ll put a note on my pillow, backpack, and my special mug. I really plead with you, Mom! C’mon! It’s just a puppy! Walks won’t be a problem: they’re good exercise!
Your mature, heartbroken, diligent child,
Charlotte
Dear Charlotte,
Eight isn’t as big as you think, but you are doing a good job convincing me. My only concern is: who’s going to pay for the puppy? I know it’s a garage sale, but it still costs money. If you will pay for it, I’ve got no grudge against getting a puppy. How much is this puppy, anyway? Tell me in your next letter if you are willing to pay.
Your convinced, defeated, reluctant parent,
Mom
Dear Mom,
Of course, I’ll pay for the puppy! The puppy costs $10.99 only! That’s a ‘yes’! I’m so excited! Put the puppy on a leash until I get home. I’ll pay you back.
Your happy, excited, celebrating child,
Charlotte
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Student Sample Being Sought: Upper Elementary
WritingFix is currently seeking a 4th-6th grade student's sample for this writing assignment. Teachers: if you can help us get a student sample, along with a digital photo of the student and a signed permission slip, we will send you a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Elementary Writing Guide. Writing written as a class or in student groups is always acceptable.
Write to us at publish@writingfix.com and write 'I Wanna Iguana' in your e-mail's subject line, if you have a student sample to share with us.
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Student Sample Being Sought: Middle School
WritingFix is currently seeking a 7th or 8th grade student's sample for this writing assignment. Teachers: if you can help us get a student sample, along with a digital photo of the student and a signed permission slip, we will send you a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Secondary Writing Guide.
Write to us at publish@writingfix.com and write 'I Wanna Iguana' in your e-mail's subject line, if you have a student sample to share with us.
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Student Sample Being Sought: High School
WritingFix is currently seeking a 9th-12th grade student's sample for this writing assignment. Teachers: if you can help us get a student sample, along with a digital photo of the student and a signed permission slip, we will send you a complimentary copy of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's Secondary Writing Guide.
Write to us at publish@writingfix.com and write 'I Wanna Iguana' in your e-mail's subject line, if you have a student sample to share with us.
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