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 Student Samples: Interjected Emotions!
voicing a story about a sporting event or a
recess activity
The writing of author David Shannon is currently inspiring student writers to try new techniques with the traits of voice and conventions.
Your students can also self-publish their writing to this lesson by clicking here.
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Additional Student Samples Being Sought:
Grades K, 1, 3, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12
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WritingFix is currently seeking additional student samples from this writing assignment that can be featured in this space. Submitted student work must show evidence of revision, editing, and the final draft must be typed and sent through e-mail. Teachers: if you can help us obtain one, two or three student samples, along with a digital photo of the student(s) and a signed permission slips, we will send you either a complimentary copy of one of the Northern Nevada Writing Project's print publications.
Write to us at publish@writingfix.com and write "No David!" in your e-mail's subject line, if you have a student sample to share with us.
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Student Samples: Early Elementary
 Stop, Rosie, Stop!
by Kassidy, second grade writer
I am tired of telling Rosie she's doing the wrong thing at her cousin's birthday party. Rosie is trying to lick the cake. Stop it, Rosie!
Rosie is pouring Kool-aid back and forth into cups. I said stop it, Rosie!
Rosie is opening her cousin's gifts. Stop! Stop! Stop!
Rosie is running all over the place. Please stop it, Rosie!
(Click here to open/print Kassidy and two of her classmates' stories.)
Student Samples: Upper Elementary
 The Big Hit
by Harlan, fourth grade writer
It’s the bottom of the ninth, two strikes, three balls, and the bases are loaded. The crowd is chanting, “Let’s go, A.J. Let’s go!”
A.J. comes up to bat, and it’s a hit to deep center field.
“Go, A.J., go!” the crowd screams from the bleachers.
As soon as A.J. rounds third base, Coach yells, “Go! Go, A.J.!”
A.J. slides into home plate and he’s…
(Click here to view and print Harlan and one of his classmate's Interjected Emotions stories).
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