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Photo Zoom Out & In Prompt
(See this prompt by clicking
here)
Notice how the writing starts with zoom-ins, then
slowly zooms out until the entire picture is described.

My mom has lots of beautiful and elegant
flowers in her garden; they are purple, magenta, white and many more
colors. My youngest dog, Sasha, likes to hear, see, taste, and
smell everything in my Mom's garden. Her whole face shows her
emotions and comforts me too. Simba, my other and older
Bernese,
is just as comforting. Simba is a lot more mellow and gentler
than Sahsa. Both of them together, romping around in the
flowers, makes an awesome picture. With their black fur with
white and tan markings, it's just...WOW!
by Alysse, age 13
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The
splashes flew through the air with deep blue water behind them.
There’s me with a black life jacket and oran ge
swim trunks on, holding onto a black handle. Our bright yellow
kneeboard glides on top of the water, and
a small cave with red sand stone in it sits there. A
swift speedboat has a red rope attached to the back of the boat. The
wake rolls behind the speedboat.
by Jeffery, age 11
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Around Lake Lahanton, many people like
to surf or windsurf. My friend John and I are doing just that. When
we ran fast into the freezing water, it felt good.
At the
first zoom out, you see a little bit of the white
surfboard. Then you start to see the pitch-black straps of the
surfboard. After that, you see the whole board and part of John’s
hands. With the fourth zoom out, you can see my friend John and me.
Last of all, you can see the white surfboard, black wet suits, John
and me, beautiful blue Lake Lahanton, and the rocky mountains behind
it.
Altogether, Lake Lahanton is an
incredible lake.
by Kevin, age 14
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