Revised and Edited Student Samples:
Kindly kissing air
Impressive inching high
Ten times taller than me
--Natalie, first grade poet
Kissing the wind
Important to children
Touching all the trees
Exciting to fly a kite
--Sara, first grade poet
Kites dip and sail in the beautiful blue sky.
In a soft breeze is a good time to fly cool kites.
Tie-dye kites are very pretty and beautiful.
Everybody’s kites have colorful imagination.
Swooping, swirling, dip, and sail in the sky wonderful kites.
--Hannah, second grade poet
Kites fly high in the beautiful sky.
Ice cold kites freeze in the wind.
Twinkling kites swerve in the wind.
Ends of kites are pointy.
Swiveling kites surfing in the sky.
--Emily, second grade poet
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