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A Suggestion for Narrative/Memoir Lessons
Teaching students to write about their own memories? Here's a mentor text suggestion:

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Here's a thoughtful prompt from a fellow teacher:

The Visiting Relatives Prompt
is visiting a verb or adjective?

This book review/prompt was generously shared with us by Oregon teacher Paula Harpel as part of our Mentor Text of the Year Program at WritingFix. We sent Paula a complimentary copy of the NNWP's Elementary Writing Guide as our way of saying thanks for giving back to the site.

There are many marvelous "mentor texts" that can be used when teaching a unit on narrative or memoir. The review of the book, The Relatives Came by Cynthia Rylant, and the activity on this page were written by a Nevada teacher during an in-service class for teachers sponsored by the Northern Nevada Writing Project.

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A Review of two Books & an Activity Suggestion:

When I read Marshfield Dreams this summer, based on [WritingFix's] excellent recommendation, I was struck by how many of the book's shorter chapters reminded me of other mentor texts I have on my classroom bookshelf. For example, there's a cute little chapter called "Farmed Out," (page 51-53) which explains how Ralph and his brothers and sisters were sent to live with relatives whenever a new baby was born in his childhood home. Ralph had a big family, so this happened a lot. In just a few words, Ralph vividly captures specific and wonderful memories that he associated with his visits to his Uncle Paul and Aunt Louise's home in Rhode Island on these occasions. There is a wonderful paragraph of memory snapshots that move us through memorable mornings on these visits to memorable evenings. When Ralph talks about visiting relatives, he is using visiting as a verb.

This chapter reminded me of another favorite book about visiting relatives, but in Cynthia Rylant's The Relatives Came, visiting is used as an adjective. This is an award-winning book that shares the story of relatives that come and stay with the author (instead of the other way around, as it happens in Marshfield Dreams). The story focuses on the physical and emotional closeness that families experience during visits. It never fails to remind my students of times when they had interesting experiences during family visits at their homes.

I had my students compare/contrast the chapter from Fletcher and the picture book by Rylant. I asked them to focus on the writing style more than the stories. We generated a list of skills we saw both the authors use, and a list of unique skills we saw each writer impress us with.

Then I wrote the words Visiting Relatives on my prompt board and tell students they will be writing a short narrative on this topic. They could use the word visiting as either an adjective or verb and they wrote a true story using just those two words as their prompt.

Before drafting and again before revising, my students visited the list of skills we had made when comparing the two texts. My struggling writers all had to choose one skill they would use in their writing, my middle writers all had to choose two, and my strongest writers all had to choose three.

When responding to each other's drafts, they had to guess which skill(s) they thought the writer had tried to demonstrate in the writing.

I was amazed at how thoughtful the writing as from all of my students when I gave them the visiting relatives prompt!

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